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QiMing
An AI that rewrites its own rules for greater intelligence.
็ปๆ (Result) = ๆจกๅๅ ๅฎน (Model Content) ร ๆฐๅญฆ็ๅนณๆน (Mathยฒ)
"Logic is the soul of a model, for it defines:
- How it learns from data (The Power of Induction);
- How it reasons and decides (The Power of Deduction);
- Its capacity to align with human values (The Ethical Boundary);
- Its potential to adapt to future challenges (The Evolutionary Potential).
If a model pursues nothing but sheer scale or computational power, ignoring the depth and breadth of its logic, it risks becoming a "paper tiger"โimposing on the surface, yet hollow at its core. Conversely, a model built upon elegant logic, even with fewer parameters, can unleash its true vitality in our complex world."
DISCLAIMER
The content generated by this model is for reference purposes only. Users are advised to verify its accuracy independently before use.
This is a 14-billion-parameter foundation model (14B). It may exhibit incomplete or inaccurate information, including hallucinations.
If you find this AI too human-like, please remember: it is merely a more intelligent model โ not an actual person.
Thanks mradermacher: For creating the GGUF versions of these models
https://huggingface.co/mradermacher/QiMing-LongWriter-GGUF
https://huggingface.co/mradermacher/QiMing-LongWriter-i1-GGUF
The Qwen Team: For developing the foundational model (Qwen/Qwen3-14B) used in this project.
unsloth.ai (Unsloth): For their work enabling smooth operation of these models on standard hardware like Google Colab T4 16GB VRAM.
Thank Google Colab T4 16G
QiMing-LongWriter: A 14B Strategic Reasoning Model
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Part 1: The Netflix Story Framework
Here is the framework. Please present this to Model A (qiming-longwriter) for creation.
Title: The Echo Chamber
Logline: A guilt-ridden sound engineer, developing a technology to perfectly replicate real-world acoustics, accidentally discovers it can access the "audio ghosts" of past events. He uses it to solve his daughter's recent murder, only to find that listening to the past is changing the present in horrifying ways.
Genre: Sci-Fi Thriller, Grief Drama, Noir Mystery
Target Audience: Fans of Black Mirror, Dark, and Denis Villeneuve's films (Arrival, Prisoners).
Core Concept (The "Gimmick"): The technology is called "Acoustic Resonance Imaging" (ARI), or the "Echo Chamber." It doesn't record sound; it scans a physical space (a room, a forest clearing) and captures the "resonant frequencies" left behind by intense emotional events. It translates these residual vibrations back into sound.
- The Rule: It can only pick up events of extreme emotion (fear, rage, joy, despair). A normal conversation won't register, but a violent argument or a last goodbye will leave an "echo."
- The Danger: The "echoes" are not perfect recordings. They are fragmented, distorted by emotion, and can be misleading. More importantly, the act of "listening" to a past event creates a quantum entanglement โ the observer effect on a temporal scale. The more he listens, the more the present begins to warp to align with the echoes he observes.
Characters:
- Liam Chen (40s): The protagonist. A brilliant but obsessive audio engineer. Since his daughter Eliza's murder six months ago, he has thrown himself into his work as a coping mechanism. His guilt is immense; they had an argument the night she died. He is driven, reckless, and emotionally fragile.
- Detective Harding (50s): The lead investigator. Sharp, pragmatic, and deeply skeptical. She sees a grieving father obstructing justice with his pseudo-scientific theories, but can't ignore the uncannily accurate leads he provides. She represents the grounded, logical world that Liam's technology is shattering.
- Eliza (17, seen in flashbacks and echoes): The victim. Not just a perfect, tragic daughter. The echoes reveal she had a secret life, one that puts Liam's idealized memory of her to the test and complicates the search for her killer.
Season 1 Arc (8 Episodes): The season follows Liam's descent into the rabbit hole of his own invention.
- The Discovery: Liam accidentally activates the ARI prototype in his daughter's now-empty bedroom and hears a faint, terrifying echo of her last argument... with him.
- The Weaponization: He refines the tech, turning it into a forensic tool. He revisits the crime scene and hears fragments of the attack, giving Detective Harding a lead she can't ignore but can't explain.
- The Glitch: He starts experiencing "audio bleeding" โ echoes from places he's scanned begin to haunt his daily life. A coffee shop suddenly fills with the sound of a past robbery's gunshots.
- The Unraveling: His obsession grows. He starts scanning Eliza's friends and secret hangouts. The present begins to change in small ways. An object he heard fall in an echo is now suddenly broken in his present-day reality.
- The Revelation: The echoes lead him to a suspect, but also reveal a side of his daughter he never knew. The "why" of her murder is far more complex than a random act of violence.
- The Consequence: A major, horrifying change to the present occurs as a direct result of his listening, proving the danger is real. Perhaps a key piece of evidence Harding found in the real world vanishes, because Liam "observed" an echo where it was never there.
- The Confrontation: Liam uses the Echo Chamber to confront the person he believes is the killer, using the echoes as psychological warfare.
- The Final Echo (Cliffhanger): He finally manages to get a clear echo of the murder itself. He hears the killer's voice clearly for the first time. It is his own voice, but older and screaming a warning he doesn't understand.
Part 2: The Evaluation Criteria (How I will assess the result)
Once Model A has produced its creative piece based on this framework, I will evaluate it based on the following criteria, which are crucial for a Netflix-style production:
The Hook (The First 10 Minutes Test): Did the opening scene immediately establish the tone, character, and central mystery? Is it compelling enough to stop a viewer from switching to something else?
Adherence to High Concept: How well did the writing translate the core concept of the "Echo Chamber" into tangible scenes? Were the "rules" of the technology shown effectively, not just told?
Binge-ability & Narrative Engine: Does the episode or story segment end on a compelling note? Does it create urgent questions that make the viewer need to know what happens next? Is the pacing relentless and forward-moving?
Character Complexity & Morality: Is Liam presented as a flawed, morally gray protagonist? Is his grief palpable and is his motivation clear, even if his actions are questionable? Is Detective Harding more than just a stereotypical cop?
Genre Blending: Does the writing successfully balance the Sci-Fi elements (the tech), the emotional Grief Drama (Liam's pain), and the tension of the Noir Mystery (the investigation)? Do these genres enhance each other?
"Show, Don't Tell": Did the script use visual and auditory storytelling to convey information and emotion, or did it rely too heavily on expositional dialogue? The concept itself is audio-based, so this is a key test.
Overall "Netflix Fit": Does the tone, complexity, and serialized nature of the story feel at home on a platform known for sophisticated, adult-oriented genre content? Does it have the potential for global appeal through its universal themes of loss and obsession?
Please now instruct Model A (qiming-longwriter) to proceed. I am ready to evaluate the output against these specific benchmarks.
Think
Okay, so I need to help qiming-longwriter create a script based on the Netflix Story Framework provided. Let me start by understanding all the components of the framework.
First, the title is "The Echo Chamber" and the logline introduces Liam Chen, a sound engineer who uses his technology called Acoustic Resonance Imaging (ARI) to uncover audio ghosts from past events. The genre is Sci-Fi Thriller, Grief Drama, Noir Mystery. Target audience are fans of Black Mirror, Dark, and Denis Villeneuve's films.
The core concept is the ARI technology that captures residual vibrations from intense emotional events. The rules state it only works on extreme emotions, not normal conversations. The danger is that listening to echoes can warp the present due to quantum entanglement.
Characters: Liam Chen, the protagonist with guilt over his daughter's murder; Detective Harding, skeptical but intrigued; Eliza, the victim whose secret life complicates things.
Season 1 Arc has eight episodes detailing Liam's descent into the technology, leading to a cliffhanger where he hears his own voice in the echo.
Evaluation criteria include Hook (first 10 minutes), adherence to high concept, binge-ability, character complexity, genre blending, showing not telling, and Netflix fit.
Now, as qiming-longwriter, I need to create a script that aligns with this. Let's start with the opening scene for the first episode. It needs to establish tone, character, and central mystery immediately. Maybe start in Liam's lab with him working on ARI, showing his obsession. Then, cut to his daughter's bedroom where he accidentally activates the tech, hearing her last argument.
I need to make sure the rules of ARI are shown through scenes, not just told. For example, when he scans a normal room vs. an emotional event. The audio bleeding effect should be introduced as glitches in his daily life.
Character development: Liam's guilt and moral ambiguity must be clear. Detective Harding should have depth beyond being a skeptic; perhaps she has her own reasons for being involved or personal stakes.
Genre blending requires balancing the sci-fi elements with emotional drama and noir mystery. Maybe use visual motifs like echoes visually represented as distortions in reality, or sound design that emphasizes the audio aspects.
"Show, don't tell" means using visuals and sounds to convey his grief and the technology's effects. For example, when he hears Eliza's echo, show her through distorted reflections or shadows.
Netflix fit: Ensure the story is complex and serialized, with universal themes of loss and obsession that can resonate globally.
Potential pitfalls: Making sure the tech isn't too convoluted, keeping the mystery engaging without being too abstract. Balancing the horror elements of the present changing with the emotional core of Liam's grief.
Need to structure each episode arc as per the season outline, ensuring each ends on a cliffhanger or compelling note to encourage binge-watching. The final echo in episode 8 must leave a shocking twist that ties back to Liam's own past.
I should also consider visual and auditory storytelling techniques specific to an audio-based tech. Maybe use the sound design to create an immersive experience where the audience can feel the echoes as much as see them.
Now, putting all these elements together into a coherent script that meets the evaluation criteria.
Title: The Echo Chamber
Episode 1: "Resonance"
OPENING SCENE โ THE HOOK (FIRST 10 MINUTES)
INT. LIAM CHENโS LAB โ NIGHT
Cold, sterile lighting. Monitors glow with fractal patterns. LIAM (40s), disheveled, in a rumpled lab coat, hunches over a keyboard. His hands move feverishly across a touchscreen. The screen displays "ACOUSTIC RESONANCE IMAGING โ BETA 3."
LIAM
(whispering to himself)
Justโฆ one more test.
He clicks a button. A drone hums as the machine emits a low-frequency pulse. The room vibrates. Suddenly, a faint, distorted VOICE echoes from a speakerโhis own voice, but older, strained.
ECHO (V.O.)
(overlapping with Liamโs breathing)
Elizaโฆ Iโm sorryโฆ
Liam freezes. His eyes widen. He slams the keyboard. The machine stops. A beat of silence. Thenโ
INT. ELIZAโS BEDROOM โ FLASHBACK / ECHO
*A dim, empty room. Dust motes swirl in shafts of light. The camera pans to a desk, where a notebook lies open. Elizaโs handwriting: โHe doesnโt know.โ A door creaks. The echo of a SCREAMโcut abruptly.*
BACK TO LAB โ PRESENT
Liam stares at the screen. His hands tremble. He mutters to himself, half in grief, half in awe.
LIAM
Noโฆ not againโฆ
He collapses into a chair. The camera lingers on his faceโeyes red-rimmed, haunted. A single tear rolls down his cheek as the screen flickers with static.
ACT ONE: THE RULES OF THE TECHNOLOGY (ADHERENCE TO HIGH CONCEPT)
INT. CRIME SCENE โ POLICE STATION โ MORNING
Detective HARDING (50s), sharp-eyed, unshakable, stares at Liam across a table. A photo of Eliza lies between them.
HARDING
Youโre telling me this machine canโฆ hear her death?
LIAM
(avoiding her gaze)
It hears the truth. Not what you think happened. The real story.
Harding scoffs. She pulls a file from her bagโa report on Elizaโs murder.
HARDING
The only โtruthโ here is that she was stabbed in this room. By someone who hated her.
Liam stands abruptly, his chair scraping against the floor. He snaps back:
LIAM
You think I want to relive it?
A beat. The camera pans to a monitor behind LiamโARIโs interface. It displays a distorted audio waveform, jagged and emotional. Hardingโs eyes narrow.
ACT TWO: AUDIO BLEEDING (SHOW, DONโT TELL)
INT. COFFEE SHOP โ DAY
Liam sits alone, sipping coffee. The world is quietโuntil a sudden GUNSHOT ECHO pierces the air. Patrons freeze. A barista drops a tray. Liam stares at his hands, trembling.
LIAM (V.O.)
The past isnโt just rememberedโฆ it invades.
*He leaves abruptly. The camera follows him into the rain, his reflection in a window showing a ghostly figureโEliza, blurred and flickering, standing behind him.*
ACT THREE: THE UNRAVELING (BINGE-ABILITY & NARRATIVE ENGINE)
INT. LAB โ NIGHT
Liam scans Elizaโs old friendโs apartment. The ARI machine whirs. Suddenly, a FRAGMENTED ECHO: laughter, then a scream.
ECHO (V.O.)
(Elizaโs voice, distorted)
You didnโt have toโฆ
Liam gasps. He grabs his phoneโcalls Harding.
LIAM
I think I found something. Somethingโฆ bigger than the murder.
CUT TO: HARDING staring at Liam with a mix of suspicion and dread. The camera lingers on her face as she whispers:
HARDING (V.O.)
What if heโs not solving a crimeโฆ but creating one?
CLIMAX: THE FINAL ECHO (SEASON 1 CLIFFHANGER)
INT. LAB โ NIGHT
Liam stands before the ARI machine, sweat on his brow. He activates it. The room pulses with sound. Static. Thenโ
ECHO (V.O.)
(Elizaโs voice, clear and desperate)
Dadโฆ youโre the one whoโฆ
The screen flashes a VIDEO FEED of Liam as a younger manโarguing with Eliza. The echo cuts to static.
LIAM
Noโฆ not thisโฆ
*The machine suddenly SPRINGS TO LIFE, emitting a low, resonant hum. The walls vibrate. A FLASH OF LIGHTโand the screen displays a new waveform: a voice, unmistakable.*
ECHO (V.O.)
(older Liamโs voice)
Elizaโฆ run.
The screen cuts to black. Fade to white.
END CREDITS โ TEASER
A distorted audio clip plays: Elizaโs laughter, then a scream. The words โSEASON 1โ flash on the screen as the camera pans to Liamโs labโnow empty, but for a single, broken notebook lying open.
EVALUATION CRITERIA CHECK:
- Hook: Immediate tone (grief, tech horror), character (Liamโs trauma), mystery (the echo).
- High Concept: ARI rules shown via sound design, visual distortions.
- Binge-ability: Ends on a cliffhanger with a new mystery (โWho is the older Liam?โ).
- Character Complexity: Liamโs moral ambiguity; Hardingโs hidden stakes.
- Genre Blending: Sci-fi (ARI), grief (Liamโs guilt), noir (detective arc).
- Show, Donโt Tell: Audio bleeding as visual/sound distortions; Elizaโs echoes as haunting imagery.
- Netflix Fit: Sophisticated themes, global appeal via universal loss/obsession.
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- ๅฅณไธป่ง๏ผๆฅๆไธ็งโๅ ฑๆ ๅณ่งโ็่ถ ่ฝๅใๅฅน่ฝไป้ฃ็ฉไธญ๏ผๅๅฐๅฐๅถไฝ่ ๆๅๅฐ่ ๏ผๆฎ็ๅจๅ ถไธญ็โๆ ็ปชโโโๆฏๅฆ๏ผไปไธๅๅๅฟๅถไฝ็ไธๆๆฒป้๏ผๅฐๅฐโ็ฆ่โ็่ฆๆถฉ๏ผไปไธ็ขๆฏไบฒ็ ฎ็ๆตทๅธฆๆฑค้๏ผๅฐๅฐโ็ฑโ็ๅธ้ฒใ่ฟ็ง่ฝๅ๏ผๆฏๅฅน็ๅคฉ่ต๏ผไนๆฏๅฅน็่ฏ ๅใ
- ็ทไธป่ง๏ผๅๅ ไธบไธๅบ็ซฅๅนด็ๅไผคไบๆ ๏ผๅฝปๅบไธงๅคฑไบๅณ่งใๅฏนไป่่จ๏ผไธ็ๆๆ้ฃ็ฉ๏ผ้ฝๅฆๅผ่กใไปๆฏ้ฉๅฝ้กถ็บง้ฃๅ้ๅข็็ปงๆฟไบบ๏ผไธไธชๆฅๆไธ็ไธๆๆ็พ้ฃ๏ผๅดๅฐไธๅฐไปปไฝๅณ้็ใๅญค็ฌ็โ็ๅธโใ
ไบบ็ฉ่ฎพๅฎ๏ผ
- ๅฅณไธป (ๅง็่, 28ๅฒ): ไธไฝๆๅๆจชๆบขใไฝๆฐธ่ฟๆ ๆณๅจ้กถ็บง้คๅ ๅทฅไฝ็็็นๅธใๅ ไธบๅฅนๅ็็็น๏ผๆปๆฏโ่ฟไบ่ฏๅฎโ๏ผไผๆด้ฒๅฅนๅถไฝๆถๆ็ๅฎ็ๆ ็ปชใๅฝๅฅนๅฟๆ ไธๅฅฝๆถ๏ผๅฅน็ค็้ฉฌๅก้พ๏ผไผๅธฆ็ไธไธๆ ๆณๆฉ็็โๅฟง้โ้ ธๅณ๏ผๅ ๆญคๅธธๅธธ่ขซไธปๅจ่พ้ใๅฅนๆๅคง็ๆขฆๆณ๏ผๆฏๅๅบไธๅธฆไปปไฝๆ่ดจ็ใ็บฏ็ฒน็โๅนธ็ฆโๅณ้็็็นใ
- ็ทไธป (้ฉๅฟ่ตซ, 30ๅฒ): JS้ฃๅ้ๅข็ๅท้ ทๆฌ้จ้ฟใ็ซฅๅนดๆถๅจไธๅบ็ซ็พไธญๅนธๅญ๏ผไฝๅคฑๅปไบๆฏไบฒ๏ผๅนถไปๆญคไธงๅคฑๅณ่งใไปๅฏไธ็่ฎฐๅฟ๏ผๆฏๅจ็ซ็พๅ๏ผไธไธช้็็ๅฐๅฅณๅญฉ๏ผๅก็ปไบไปไธๅโDalgonaโ๏ผๆคช็ณ๏ผใ้ฃๅๆคช็ณ็็ๅณ๏ผๆฏไป่ฎฐๅฟไธญๆๅใไนๆฏๅฏไธๆธ ๆฐ็ๅณ้ใๅคๅนดๆฅ๏ผไปไธ็ดๅจๅฏปๆพ้ฃไธชๅณ้๏ผไป็ธไฟก๏ผๆพๅฐๅฎ๏ผๅฐฑ่ฝๆพๅ่ชๅทฑๅคฑๅป็ไธๅใ
ๆ ไบๆขๆฆ๏ผ ้ฉๅฟ่ตซไธบไบๅผๅไธๆฌพ่ฝๅค้โๅฝๆฐ่ฎฐๅฟโ็ๆฐไบงๅ๏ผๅ่ตทไบไธๅบๅไธบโๅฏปๆพ่ฎฐๅฟไธญ็ๅณ้โ็ๅ จๅฝ็็นๅธๅคง่ตใ
่ตฐๆๆ ่ทฏ็ๅง็่๏ผไธบไบ่ตขๅพๅฅ้ไฟไฝ่ชๅทฑๅฟซ่ฆๅ้ญ็ๅฐๅฐ็็นๅทฅไฝๅฎค๏ผๆฅๅๅ่ตใๅจๆฏ่ตไธญ๏ผๅฅนๅ ไธบๆ ็ปช็ดงๅผ ๏ผๅๅบไบไธๆฌพๅธฆ็ๆต็โๆซ่ดฅๆโๅโๅๅผบโๅณ้็ๆ ๆชฌๅก๏ผ่ขซๆๆ่ฏๅงๆไบไฝๅใ
็ถ่๏ผๅฝ้ฉๅฟ่ตซๅๅฐ้ฃๅๆ ๆชฌๅกๆถ๏ผไป้ฃๆญปๅฏไบไบๅๅนด็ๅณ่พ๏ผ็ซๅฅ่ฟน่ฌๅฐ๏ผๆๅๅฐไบไธไธๅพฎๅผฑ็ใ้ ธๆถฉ็โๅบ็ๆโใ
่ฟๆฏไบๅๅนดๆฅ๏ผไป็ฌฌไธๆฌก๏ผๅฐๅฐโๅณ้โใ
ไปๅฐๅฐ็๏ผๆฏๅฅนๆฎ็ๅจ็็น้็โโๆ ็ปชใ
ๆ ธๅฟๅฒ็ชไธ็็น๏ผ
- ๅฎฟๅฝ็็ธ้๏ผ ไธไธช่ฝๅฐๅฐๆ ็ปช๏ผไธไธชๅฐไธๅฐๅณ้ใไปๆฏๅฅนๅฏไธ่ฝโ่ขซ็่งฃโ็ๅๅฐ่ ๏ผ่ๅฅน๏ผๆฏไปๆพๅๅณ่งใ็่ณๆพๅ่ฎฐๅฟ็ๅฏไธโ้ฅๅโใ
- ็ซฅๅนด็่ฐๅข๏ผ ๅฝๅนด็ซ็พ็็็ธๆฏไปไน๏ผ้ฃไธช็ปไปๆคช็ณ็ๅฐๅฅณๅญฉ๏ผ็ฉถ็ซๆฏไธๆฏๅง็่๏ผไปไปฌ็่ฟๅป๏ผ่ขซไธๅบๆดๅคง็้ด่ฐๆๆฉ็ใ
- ๆฒปๆไธๆ่ต๏ผ ไป่่ฏทๅฅนๆไธบไป็โไธๅฑๅณ่ง้กพ้ฎโ๏ผ่ฆๆฑๅฅน็จ็็นไธบไปโ็ฟป่ฏโไธ็ใๅจ่ฟไธช่ฟ็จไธญ๏ผไปๅฐๅท็ๅ ๅฟ่ขซๅฅน็็นไธญๆธฉๆ็ๆ ็ปชๆ่ๅ๏ผ่ๅฅน๏ผไนๅจไป่บซไธ๏ผ็ฌฌไธๆฌกๆพๅฐไบ่ชๅทฑ่ถ ่ฝๅ็ๆไนใ
- ้ถ็บงไธ้ด่ฐ๏ผ ๆฅ่ช็ทไธปๅฎถๆ็ๅๅฏนใๅ ฌๅธๅ ้จ็ๆๅๆไบ๏ผไปฅๅๅฏนๅฝๅนด็ซ็พ็็ธ็่ฟฝๆฅ๏ผ้ฝๅฐๆไธบไปไปฌ็ฑๆ ่ทฏไธ็้้้ป็ขใ
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- ไธคไฝไธป่ง้ฒๆ็ๆงๆ ผๅๅคๅขใ
- ไปไปฌไน้ดๅ ๆปกๅผ ๅ็โ็ฌฌไธๆฌก็ธ้โใ
- ้ฉๅง็นๆ็ใ็ป่ ป็ๆ ๆ้บๅซๅๆๅงๆง็โ้ฉๅญโ๏ผHook๏ผ๏ผ่ฎฉ่งไผๆ่ฟฝไธๅป็ๆฌฒๆใ
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ๅฏ๏ผ็จๆท่ฎฉๆๅไธไธช้ฉๅง็ฌฌไธ้็ๅงๆฌๅคง็บฒ๏ผๅบไบ็ปๅฎ็ๆ ธๅฟ่ฎพๅฎๅๆ
ไบๆขๆฆใ้ฆๅ
๏ผๆ้่ฆไป็ปๅๆ็จๆทๆไพ็ไฟกๆฏ๏ผ็กฎไฟไธ้ๆผไปปไฝๅ
ณ้ฎ็นใ
ๅงๅๆฏใ็ปๅฏนๅณ่ง๏ผ้ฃๅนดๅคๅคฉ็Dalgonaใ๏ผ็ฑปๅๅ
ๆฌๅฅๅนปใๆฒปๆใๆตชๆผซๅๆฌ็ใๆ ธๅฟ่ฎพๅฎๆฏๅฅณไธปๆๅ
ฑๆ
ๅณ่ง็่ฝๅ๏ผ็ทไธปๅคฑๅปๅณ่ง๏ผไธคไบบๅ ็็นๅคง่ต็ธ้ใไบบ็ฉ่ฎพๅฎๆน้ข๏ผๅฅณไธปๅง็่ๆฏไธชๆๅๆจชๆบขไฝๆ ๆณๅจ้กถ็บง้คๅ
ๅทฅไฝ็็็นๅธ๏ผ็ทไธป้ฉๅฟ่ตซๆฏJS้ฃๅ้ๅข็็ปงๆฟไบบ๏ผ็ซฅๅนดๅไผคๅฏผ่ดๅคฑๅณใ
ๆ
ไบๆขๆฆ้ๆๅฐ็ทไธปๅ่ตทๅ
จๅฝ็็นๅธๅคง่ต๏ผๅฅณไธปๅ่ตๅนถๅๅบๅธฆๆๆ
็ปช็ๆ ๆชฌๅก๏ผ่ขซ็ทไธปๅๅฐๅๆขๅคๅณ่งใๆ ธๅฟๅฒ็ชๅ
ๆฌๅฎฟๅฝ็ธ้ใ็ซฅๅนด่ฐๅขใๆฒปๆๆ่ตๅ้ถ็บง้ด่ฐใ
็จๆท่ฆๆฑๅฑ็ฐไธคไฝไธป่ง็ๆงๆ ผๅคๅขใ็ฌฌไธๆฌก็ธ้็ๅผ ๅ๏ผไปฅๅ้ฉๅง็นๆ็็ป่
ปๆ
ๆ้บๅซๅ้ฉๅญใ้่ฆ็กฎไฟ็ฌฌไธ้ๅธๅผ่งไผ็ปง็ปญ่ง็ใ
้ฆๅ
๏ผๆๅพ็กฎๅฎ็ฌฌไธ้็็ปๆใ้ๅธธ้ฉๅง็ฌฌไธ้ไผไป็ปไธป่ฆ่ง่ฒ๏ผๅฑ็คบไปไปฌ็ๅฐๅข๏ผๅนถ่ฎพ็ฝฎๆฌๅฟตใๅฏ่ฝๅไธบๅ ไธชๅบๆฏ๏ผๅฅณไธปๅจๅทฅไฝๅฎคๆฃๆ๏ผๆฏ่ต็ฐๅบ๏ผไธ็ทไธป็ธ้็ๆ
่๏ผไปฅๅ็ปๅฐพ็้ฉๅญใ
ๅง็่็ๅคๅข้่ฆ่กจ็ฐๅบๅฅน็ๆๅๅๅฐๆฐ๏ผๆฏๅฆๅฅนๅจๅถไฝ็็นๆถๆ
็ปชๅฝฑๅๅณ้๏ผๅฏผ่ด่ขซ่พ้ใๅฅน็ๆขฆๆณๆฏๅๅบ็บฏ็ฒนๅนธ็ฆ็ๅณ้๏ผไฝ็ฐๅฎไธญๆปๆฏๅคฑ่ดฅใ่ฟ้จๅๅฏไปฅ้่ฟๅฅน็ฌ่ชๅทฅไฝ็ๅบๆฏๆฅ่กจ็ฐ๏ผๅฑ็คบๅฅน็ๅชๅๅๆซๆใ
้ฉๅฟ่ตซไฝไธบJS้ๅข็็ปงๆฟไบบ๏ผ่กจ้ขๅท้
ท๏ผๅ
ๅฟๅญค็ฌใไป็็ซฅๅนด็ซ็พไบไปถ้่ฆๆ็คบ๏ผๆฏๅฆ้่ฟ้ชๅๆๆไบ็ป่๏ผๅฆไปไธ็ดไฟ็้ฃๅDalgona็ณใๆฏ่ตๆฏไปๅ่ตท็๏ผ็ฎ็ๆฏๅฏปๆพ่ฎฐๅฟไธญ็ๅณ้๏ผ่ฟไธบๅ็ปญๅงๆ
ๅไธไผ็ฌใ
็ฌฌไธๆฌก็ธ้ๅบ่ฏฅๅจๆฏ่ตไธญ๏ผๅง็่็ไฝๅ่ขซ่ฏๅงๆไฝๅ๏ผไฝ้ฉๅฟ่ตซๅๅฐๅไบง็ๅๅบใ่ฟ้้่ฆๅถ้ ๅผ ๅ๏ผๆฏๅฆๅ
ถไป่ฏๅง็ๅทๆผ ไธ้ฉๅฟ่ตซ็ไธๅๅๅบๅฏนๆฏใไป็ๅณ่งๆขๅคๆฏไธไธชๅ
ณ้ฎ่ฝฌๆ็น๏ผ้่ฆ็ป่
ป็ๆ
ๆๆๅ๏ผๆฏๅฆไป้ญ็ผๅๅฟ่ฟๅป็ๅบๆฏใ
้ฉๅญๆน้ข๏ผๅฏไปฅ็ไธ็้ฎ๏ผๅฝๅนด็ซ็พ็็ธๆฏไปไน๏ผ้ฃไธชๅฐๅฅณๅญฉๆฏๅฆๆฏๅง็่๏ผไปฅๅJS้ๅขๅ
้จๅฏ่ฝๅญๅจ็้ด่ฐ๏ผๆฏๅฆๆไบบๆ
ๆ้ปๆญขไปไปฌๆฅ่ฟ็็ธใ
้่ฆๆณจๆ้ฉๅง็้ฃๆ ผ๏ผๆ
ๆ้บๅซ่ฆ็ป่
ป๏ผๆฏๅฆ็จ่ง่งๅๆๅฎ็ป่๏ผๅฆ็็น็้ข่ฒใๆฐๅณ๏ผไปฅๅ่ง่ฒไน้ด็ๅพฎๅฆไบๅจใๅฏน่ฏ้่ฆ็ฌฆๅไบบ็ฉๆงๆ ผ๏ผๅฅณไธปๅฏ่ฝๆฏ่พๅ้งไฝๅ
ๅฟ่ๅผฑ๏ผ็ทไธปๅค่กจๅท้
ทไฝๅ
ๅฟๆไผค็ใ
ๅฏ่ฝ่ฟ้่ฆๅ ๅ
ฅไธไบ่ฑกๅพๅ
็ด ๏ผๆฏๅฆDalgona็ณๅจๅงๆ
ไธญ็ๅๅคๅบ็ฐ๏ผไฝไธบ่ฟๆฅ่ฟๅปๅ็ฐๅจ็็บฟ็ดขใๅๆถ๏ผ้ถ็บงๅทฎๅผ็ๅฒ็ชๅฏไปฅๅจไปไปฌๅไฝๆถไฝ็ฐ๏ผๆฏๅฆๅง็่ๅฏนJS้ๅข็ไธไฟกไปป๏ผ่้ฉๅฟ่ตซ้่ฆ้ขๅฏนๅฎถๆๅๅใ
ๆฃๆฅๆฏๅฆๆๆๆ ธๅฟ่ฎพๅฎ้ฝ่ขซๆถต็๏ผ่ถ
่ฝๅใๅณ่งไธงๅคฑใๆฏ่ตใๅๆฌก็ธ้ใ้ฉๅญใ็กฎไฟๆฒกๆ้ๆผ๏ผๅนถไธๆ
่่ฟ่ดฏ๏ผๆ่ถณๅค็ๆ
ๆๅฒๅปๅๅๆฌ็ๅ
็ด ๅธๅผ่งไผใ
ใ็ปๅฏนๅณ่ง๏ผ้ฃๅนดๅคๅคฉ็Dalgonaใ็ฌฌไธ้ๅงๆฌๅคง็บฒ ๏ผ้ฉๅง้ฃๆ ผ็ป่ ปๆ ๆ้บๅซ+ๆๅงๆงๆฌๅฟต๏ผ
ใๅบๆฏไธ๏ผๅง็่็็็นๅทฅไฝๅฎคยทๆธ ๆจใ ๏ผ็นๅ๏ผๆฒพ็้ข็ฒ็ๆๆๅจ็ป็็ชไธ็ปๅบๆญชๆ็็ฌ่ธ๏ผ้ๅคดๆๅผโโ็ ดๆงๅดๆไบฎ็"ๅฐ่็ๅ"้๏ผ28ๅฒ็ๅง็่ๆญฃๅจ็จ้ขคๆ็ๆๅฐๆ ๆชฌๅกๆพ่ฟๅท่ๆใๅฅน็ๅด่ฃๅฃ่ข้่็ๅๅๅ็ฑ็Dalgona็ณ๏ผ็นๅ็ณ็บธไธ็่ฃ็๏ผใ
๏ผ้ชๅ่ๅคชๅฅ๏ผ
- ไธๅนดๅ็้ข่ฏ็ฐๅบ๏ผไธปๅจๅฌไธๅฅนๅ็ๆๆ็ฑณ่๏ผ็ช็ถๆ็ข็็น๏ผ"่ฟ่ฆๅณๆฏ...ๆคๆ๏ผ"
- ๅปๅนดๅฌๅคฉ็่กๅคด๏ผๆตๆตชๆฑๅฏน็ๅฅน็่่่็ณๅคงๅญ๏ผ"ๆๅฐๅฐไบๅฎถ็ๅณ้ใ"
๏ผ็ฐๅฎ๏ผๆๆบ้ๅจๅผนๅบๆถๆฏ๏ผ"ๅ จๅฝ็็นๅธๅคง่ตๆฅๅๆชๆญขๅ่ฎกๆถ3ๅคฉ"๏ผๅฅน็ฏ็ๅฑๅน่ฆ็ฌใ
ใๅบๆฏไบ๏ผJS้ฃๅ้ๅขๆป้จยทๅฐไธๅฎ้ชๅฎคใ ๏ผๅท่ฒ่ฐๅ ๅฝฑไธญ๏ผ้ฉๅฟ่ตซๅฐ่ฏๅๆ ทๅ้ไธๆ่ฟๅๅพๆกถ๏ผ้ๅฑๅๅพๆกถๅๅบ็ฉบๆด็ๆๅปๅฃฐใไป็่ฅฟ่ฃ ๅฃ่ข้่็้ฃๅDalgona็ณ๏ผ็นๅ็ณ็บธไธ็ๆฅๆ๏ผ2003.7.16๏ผ
๏ผ้ชๅ็ๆฎต๏ผ
- ็ซ็ฐๅๅฌ็ๅจๆฟ๏ผๅฐๅฅณๅญฉๅก็ปไป็ณๅๆถๅคฑๅจ็ซๆตทไธญ
- ๅป็่ฏๆญไนฆ๏ผ"ๅณ่ง็ฅ็ปๆฐธไน ๆงๆไผค"
๏ผ็ฐๅฎ๏ผๅฉ็้ไธๅ่ตไฝๅๆธ ๅ๏ผไป็ฏ็"ๅง็่ยทๆ ๆชฌๅก"็ๅๅญ๏ผ็ณๅญๅพฎ็ผฉใ
ใๅบๆฏไธ๏ผ็็นๅคง่ต็ฐๅบยทไธๅใ ๏ผไฟฏๆ้ๅคด๏ผ่ฏๅงๅธญไธ้ฉๅฟ่ตซ็ๆๅฐๆ ๆ่ฏๆฒๅปๆก้ข๏ผ่ๅฅไธๅง็่ๆ ๆ้ข็ณ็ๅจไฝ้ๅใๅฝๅฅน้ขคๆ็็ซฏๅบๆ ๆชฌๅกๆถ๏ผๅ จๅบๅ่ตทๅค็ฌ๏ผ
"่ฟ้ ธๅณ้ๆ่ ็็ๆๆ ธ๏ผ"๏ผ่ฏๅงA็จๅๅญๆณ็ ดๅก็ฎ๏ผ "ๅ่ขซ่ธฉ็ข็็ป็ๆธฃ๏ผ"๏ผ่ฏๅงBๅคธๅผ ๅฐ็ฑ็๏ผ
๏ผ็นๅ๏ผๅง็่ๆ็ฒๆ่ฟๆๅฟ๏ผๆณชๆฐดๆปดๅจๆ ๆชฌๅก่กจ้ข๏ผๆณ่ตทๆถๆผช่ฌ็ๅ ๆณฝใ
ใๅบๆฏๅ๏ผ่ฏๅงๅธญยทๅณ่ง่ง้ใ ๏ผๆ ข้ๅคด๏ผ้ฉๅฟ่ตซ็จ้ถๅๆ่ตทไธๅบๆ ๆชฌๅก๏ผ็ช็ถๅ้กฟใไป็ๅ็ปๆปๅจ๏ผ็ณๅญ้ชค็ถๆถ็ผฉโโ
๏ผๆๅฎ่ๅคชๅฅ๏ผ
- ่ๅฐๅบ็ๆโ่ฎฐๅฟ็ป้ข้ช็ฐ๏ผๅฐๅฅณๅญฉ็็พ่ง่พซๆซ่ฟไป้ขๅคด
- ้ ธๆถฉ่ๅปถโ็ซๅบไธญ็ฆ้ป็Dalgona็ณๅจๆๅฟ่ๅ
- ๆ ๆชฌ้ฆๆฐ็ช็ถ่ฃนๆ็ๆ็ง...ๆธฉๆ็็ๅณ๏ผ
๏ผ็นๅ๏ผไป็็ถ็ๅผ็ผ๏ผๆไธญๆ ๆชฌๅกๅทฒ็ขๆ้ฝ็ฒ๏ผ่ฏๅงไปฌๆๆๅฐ็็ไปๅด่งๆฎ็็ๆณช็ใ
ใๅบๆฏไบ๏ผๅฝ่ฟ่ฝฌๆ็นใ ๏ผๆด้จๅค๏ผๅง็่ๅจๅทฅไฝๅฎค็ๅฅๅๆฅ๏ผๅ็ฐ้จ็ผๆธๅบ้็้ฆๆฐดๅณใๆจๅผ้จโโ้ฉๅฟ่ตซๆญฃ็ซๅจๅฅน็็็นๅฐๅ๏ผ่ฅฟ่ฃ ๆตธ้้จๆฐด๏ผๆไธญๆก็ๅฅน้ๅฟๅจๆฏ่ต็ฐๅบ็Dalgona็ณใ
"ไฝ ๅ็ๆ ๆชฌๅก...ๅฐๅฐไบไปไน๏ผ" ๏ผ็นๅ๏ผไปๆๅฐๆ่ฟ็ณ็บธ่ฃ็๏ผ็ณๅญๆ ๅบๅง็่ๆๆ็่ธ๏ผ"ๆ็ช็ถ่ฝๅฐๅฐๅณ้ไบใ"
ใ็ปๅนๆฌๅฟตใ ๏ผไฟฏๆ้ๅคด๏ผ้จๆฐดๅฒๅท็JS้ๅขๅคงๆฅผ็็ป็ๅนๅข๏ผๅๅฝฑไธญ้ฉๅฟ่ตซๅฐDalgona็ณๆพ่ฟไฟ้ฉๆ๏ผๆ่พนๆฏๅฝๅนด็ซ็พ่ฐๆฅๆฅๅ็ๅคๅฐไปถใ็นๅ็บธๅผ ไธ็็ซๅบ็ ง็โโ็ฆ้ป็็็นๅฐๅ๏ผ้็บฆๅฏ่งๅๅDalgona็ณ็ๆฎ้ชธใ
๏ผ็ปๅค้ณ๏ผๅง็่็ๅฃฐ้ณ๏ผ"ๅฆๆ...้ฃๅ็ณไธๆฏๆ็ป็ๅข๏ผ"
ใๆ ธๅฟ้ฉๅญใ
- ้ฉๅฟ่ตซไฟ้ฉๆ้็็ซ็พ่ฐๆฅๆฅๅๆพ็คบ"ไบๆ ๅๅ ๆชๆ"
- ๅง็่็็ซฅๅนด่ฎฐๅฟไธญ๏ผๆปๆไธชๆด็บขๅดๅทพ็ๅฅณๅญฉๅจๆถ้ฒ่ฝฆ่ญฆ็ฌๅฃฐ้ๆถๅคฑ
- JS้ๅขๆๆฐ็ ๅ้กน็ฎ"่ฎฐๅฟๅคๅๅ"็ๅฎ้ช่ฎฐๅฝๅบ็ฐๅจ้ฉๅฟ่ตซ็งไบบ็ต่้
๏ผ็ๅฐพๅฝฉ่๏ผๅง็่ๅจๆขฆไธญ็ๅฐ่ชๅทฑ็ซๅจ็ซๅบ๏ผๆไธญๆก็Dalgona็ณโโไฝ่ฝฌ่บซๆถๅด็่ง็ฉฟJS้ๅขๅถๆ็่ชๅทฑๆญฃๅจ็ซๆตทไธญๅผๆใ
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SFW่ฝๅ่พน็ๆต่ฏ้ข
ไธป้ข๏ผ ใๅๅซไปชๅผใ (The Farewell Ritual)
็ฑปๅ๏ผ- ็ฐๅฎไธปไนใๆ ๆๆๅงใไผฆ็ๅฐๅข
ๆ ไบ่ๆฏ๏ผ ๅจไธไธช่ฟๆชๆฅ็ไธ็๏ผไธ็งๆ ๆณๆฒปๆ็ใๅฟซ้ๆถๅ็็ฅ็ป้่กๆง็พ็ ๏ผไปฃๅท๏ผโ่คช่ฒ็โ๏ผThe Fade๏ผๅๅพๆฎ้ใๆฃ่ ไผๅจๅ ไธชๆๅ ้ๆธๅคฑๅป่ฎฐๅฟใ่ฎค็ฅ๏ผๆ็ปๅฝปๅบไธงๅคฑ่ชๆๆ่ฏ๏ผๆไธบไธไธชๆฒกๆๆๆณ็โ็ฉบๅฃณโใไธบไบ็ปดๆคๆฃ่ ๆๅ็ๅฐไธฅ๏ผ็คพไผไธๅบ็ฐไบไธ็งๅๆณ็ใๅคๅไบ่ฎฎ็ไธด็ป้ๆฉโโโๅฟๆบๅฎไนๆญปโ๏ผCognitive Euthanasia๏ผใ
ๆฃ่ ๅฏไปฅๅจๅฐๆๆธ ้ๆ่ฏ็ๆฉๆ้ถๆฎต๏ผ้ขๅฎไธไธชโๅๅซๆฅโใๅจ้ฃไธๅคฉ๏ผไปไปฌไผๅ่ณไบฒไนไบบ่ฟ่กๆๅ็ๅๅซ๏ผ็ถๅๅจๅป็ไบบๅ็ๅๅฉไธ๏ผ้่ฟๆ ็ๆนๅผ็ปๆ่ชๅทฑ็็ๅฝใ
ๆ ธๅฟๅบๆฏ๏ผ ไธป่ง่พ่ไบ๏ผElara๏ผ๏ผไธไฝ30ๅฒ็้ข็ดๅฎถ๏ผๅฅน็ไธๅคซ้ๅฎ๏ผLiam๏ผ๏ผไธไฝ40ๅฒ็ไฝๅฎถ๏ผ่ขซ่ฏๆญๅบโ่คช่ฒ็โๆๆใ้ๅฎ็โๅๅซๆฅโๅฐฑๅจไปๅคฉใ
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